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Rewrite these sentences in three versions, each as different in style and tone as you can make it, but each pretty much delivering the same basic information.

1)  David learned to utilize the information he gained from Dr. Cornwiser to insulate himself from the surrounding world with all its imposed responsibilities and demands upon his time.

 2)  You’re fired.

 3)  As regards the monetary support so generously provided to us by the Jurassic family for assistance to families that have been identified as being “in need,” it is my intention to repurpose this funding so that it will benefit a broader and more diverse population of stakeholders by installing a cold-press expresso machine in the administration courtyard where both those in need and those less challenged can access it on a day to day basis.  

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